tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8307761.post8000981192575328377..comments2023-04-26T17:27:01.571+08:00Comments on To the Tale, and Other Such Concerns: Fiction: MatricesSeanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03300224368246428017noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8307761.post-41897861819228061532007-06-07T02:21:00.000+08:002007-06-07T02:21:00.000+08:00Katrin: Maybe I'll edit this someday. I've read th...Katrin: Maybe I'll edit this someday. I've read through it two or three times since I first posted it, and I've got a whole laundry list of grievances against my own work here. I should be my own worst critic.Seanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03300224368246428017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8307761.post-90189903572351717202007-06-04T16:18:00.000+08:002007-06-04T16:18:00.000+08:00Yeah. At first i thought it was an adaptation of H...Yeah. At first i thought it was an adaptation of Heroes, where there is a Japanese guy who has teleportation powers. But I haven't really watched any episode so I cannot confirm. And I got confused with what's really happening to Renjin in the story. I like your stories better after you've edited them in coldblood :DAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17600869690145938504noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8307761.post-31851817435357185222007-06-01T18:57:00.000+08:002007-06-01T18:57:00.000+08:00Kyutbabe: To be honest, I didn't like how the stor...Kyutbabe: To be honest, I didn't like how the story turned out, period. It was meant to be an experiment in white heat (where you write whatever comes to mind at the moment) and flash fiction (where you tell a story according to a smaller-than-usual word limit). "Renjin" was the first name that came to mind when I began writing, and in retrospect I should have changed it when I was doing my edits. It doesn't exactly fit the setting, does it?Seanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03300224368246428017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8307761.post-38684569736078080692007-06-01T15:47:00.000+08:002007-06-01T15:47:00.000+08:00I didn't like the name of the character. It seems ...I didn't like the name of the character. It seems that your usual name for a character is japanese-sounding.kyutbabehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01833319269702766783noreply@blogger.com